tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post9204512942368977982..comments2023-10-25T12:05:13.761-04:00Comments on Barbara Martin: Two Sentence Tuesday: 21 July 2009Barbara Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-56756252852170895602009-07-23T21:37:25.553-04:002009-07-23T21:37:25.553-04:00Phoenix, then I'm on the right track.Phoenix, then I'm on the right track.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-63054784252448124732009-07-21T22:36:22.519-04:002009-07-21T22:36:22.519-04:00I love the picture your sentences build! Very intr...I love the picture your sentences build! Very intriguing and atmospheric.Phoenix C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13852678924557075302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-74262153429157543082009-07-21T20:28:43.831-04:002009-07-21T20:28:43.831-04:00Teresa, I have an editor who makes me work hard at...Teresa, I have an editor who makes me work hard at my writing.<br /><br />As for "The Gargoyle", stay tuned for an upcoming book review. It has received international acclaim.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-52204126374982101492009-07-21T20:25:28.779-04:002009-07-21T20:25:28.779-04:00Leah, thank you. There is an old adage about liste...Leah, thank you. There is an old adage about listening at key holes that might fit this situation.<br /><br />Scott, I agree, there is nothing quite like writing with real liquid ink and using a blotter.<br /><br />Charles, Brother Cristo is about to learn a life-changing lesson.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-84630883579094316812009-07-21T12:16:23.313-04:002009-07-21T12:16:23.313-04:00You sure know how to build suspense, Barbara!! And...You sure know how to build suspense, Barbara!! And The Gargoyle sounds shiveringly delightful.Teresahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12831169405732892599noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-40947766609720094742009-07-21T11:59:40.281-04:002009-07-21T11:59:40.281-04:00that "brother Christo" scene is certainl...that "brother Christo" scene is certainly intersting and intriguing.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-66600929000349611012009-07-21T11:59:23.552-04:002009-07-21T11:59:23.552-04:00As one who loves liquid ink, I really dug the &quo...As one who loves liquid ink, I really dug the "reed nib into the dark ink and from a droplet..." line. I can just hear the scratching of the reed on parchment. Yeah!Scott D. Parkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15293540073601809197noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-58382883899567140902009-07-21T10:40:10.593-04:002009-07-21T10:40:10.593-04:00Good scene settting. Your second sentence is most ...Good scene settting. Your second sentence is most unsettling.Leah J. Utashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08497599109798015888noreply@blogger.com