tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post2236431379554202604..comments2023-10-25T12:05:13.761-04:00Comments on Barbara Martin: Two Sentence TuesdayBarbara Martinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-30749437309009499842009-03-11T01:32:00.000-04:002009-03-11T01:32:00.000-04:00Linda, Wilhelm is a big, strong man. He'll be over...Linda, Wilhelm is a big, strong man. He'll be over his surprise quickly.<BR/><BR/>Clouida, thanks and I really have to rewrite the previous sentence.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-88657089754333377302009-03-11T01:05:00.000-04:002009-03-11T01:05:00.000-04:00I'm with David C. I liked that line also, Barbara....I'm with David C. <BR/>I liked that line also, Barbara.<BR/>Aloha-Cloudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05853753108637831069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-11699865753972614232009-03-10T17:12:00.000-04:002009-03-10T17:12:00.000-04:00Great choices this week, Barbara. The Christmas st...Great choices this week, Barbara. The Christmas story sounds naughty but fun, and I like your sentences. Poor Wilhelm, hope he recovers quickly. ;)Linda McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15291670592316021851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-43438865919854309192009-03-10T16:59:00.000-04:002009-03-10T16:59:00.000-04:00Bernard, it will be rewritten once the first draft...Bernard, it will be rewritten once the first draft is complete. Thanks for helping though.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-18212594350130335662009-03-10T15:54:00.000-04:002009-03-10T15:54:00.000-04:00I think your first sentence could be split into tw...I think your first sentence could be split into two, eliminating both an 'and' along with a few commas.BernardLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09722619048888613647noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-24233734356455572332009-03-10T14:23:00.000-04:002009-03-10T14:23:00.000-04:00Naught is nice. Sounds like a good bumper sticker...Naught is nice. Sounds like a good bumper sticker.Charles Gramlichhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02052592247572253641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-12142323764753058082009-03-10T13:57:00.000-04:002009-03-10T13:57:00.000-04:00Clare, note taken.Lois, it often takes more than a...Clare, note taken.<BR/><BR/>Lois, it often takes more than a hint to get my blood pressure up.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-48904228966427029892009-03-10T13:52:00.000-04:002009-03-10T13:52:00.000-04:00David, Wilhelm's not too happy she's kocked the br...David, Wilhelm's not too happy she's kocked the breath out of him.<BR/><BR/>Crystal, then tune in next week.<BR/><BR/>Gary, if you blush at this mere mention, I'm worried about a possible stroke when the sizzle starts.Barbara Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00610140328527165017noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-88046683596425387592009-03-10T13:18:00.000-04:002009-03-10T13:18:00.000-04:00My my! Two-sentence-tuesday participants are randy...My my! Two-sentence-tuesday participants are randy this week!Lois Karlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00658333345815494310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-66925076275195441742009-03-10T12:48:00.000-04:002009-03-10T12:48:00.000-04:00Loving it, Barbara, and thanks for the linkage, bu...Loving it, Barbara, and thanks for the linkage, but don't forget to swing by our comments to let us know you've posted. I may check you, but other WoM may not know to do it, and we don't want to miss your intriguing two.Clare2ehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06105229820107294986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-63620070831749749032009-03-10T11:14:00.000-04:002009-03-10T11:14:00.000-04:00::::blushblushblush::::::::blushblushblush::::Gary's third pottery bloghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07113249576164428106noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-6707272626771793072009-03-10T10:33:00.000-04:002009-03-10T10:33:00.000-04:00I love it, Barbara! I want to read more.I love it, Barbara! I want to read more.Crystal Phareshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14881609059618148820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4476278785366059110.post-47756842469899295202009-03-10T05:30:00.000-04:002009-03-10T05:30:00.000-04:00"Her strength had belied her feminine stature" is ..."Her strength had belied her feminine stature" is bloody brilliant as the Brits say.David Cranmerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04749857752139212888noreply@blogger.com